• Kikaku wrote of coarser subjects than Bashō, and in this respect his poetry was closer to earlier haikai, as well as to
senryu, and his master is known to have denigrated Kikaku's 'flippant efforts'. • Comparing Kikaku's paired haiku in 'The Rustic Haiku Contest', Bashō remarked of one that "these are artifices within a work of art; too much craft has been expended here". • One day, Kikaku composed a haiku, :
Red dragonfly / break off its wings / Sour cherry which Bashō changed to, :
Sour cherry / add wings to it / Red dragonfly; thus saying that poetry should add life to life, not take life away from life. ==See also==